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AN MAN STRY
By J Mahnik
rystl Springs - Winter
WEME T RYSTA SPRINS PP 1,5 EEVATIN 6,1 ft. Th sign is nstld in
th gnd, patially hiddn by a blankt f fsh snw ving th twn. Th twn itslf is
qaint and simpl, with small wdn hss lining th main stt. Smk iss fm himnys,
a sign that th twnsppl a kping wam insid. Fndd in 187, th pitsq mntain
mmnity fftivly ss th fst’s pin stags as fiwd t stay wam ding hash wints
lik this n, whih has agd f tw nstiv days.
ystal Spings is waking slwly, lik it always ds—ff bwing, sidnts
bndling p t stay wam. Thik lays f p, glistning snw ah p t th windwsills f
th qaint wdn abins, ating vy t banh in a fsty mba. Th snw is
nlnting, ming dwn in thik shts, ding visibility t almst nthing and making it
diffilt t s bynd a fw ft. Snwflaks swil in a hati fnzy, making it naly
impssibl t s in th whitt nditins. Th bight ang snwplw is baly visibl as it
inhs its way alng Main Stt, laving bhind dp ti taks in its wak.
Mas Mally is in his ightis, a tall, ggd fig with a fa that shws yas f
xpin and silin living in th hash mntain limat. Fily indpndnt and st in his
ways, h mbins mntain-twn silin with a th f antanks ham and has a smat
mbak f vyn nt xpting a lgial spns t an thwis vyday qstin. H
maintains stit daily tins with nwaving ddiatin, fm his mning ital f stng, blak
ff t his daily tk t Hay’s Pb & b f a fsty shn f pilsn. Whil his stbbn
stak an fstat ths and him, patilaly his insistn n vnting t in dangs
wath, h psssss a qit dignity that mmands spt. 2
His wif had bn gn f yas sin an tk h th way it taks mst ppl—
slwly ngh t lt y say gdby, qikly ngh that n amnt f gdby v fls lik
ngh. Thy had n hildn.
Aft fty-th yas f maiag, th apatmnt smd t shink and Mas sh
did. Th ms that had n aid th snds f nvsatin and laght nw hd with
siln, and th tlvisin ftn playd nly t kp him mpany. H diftd thgh his days
witht pps ntil n ainy vning, whn h fnd a tmbling stay dg hddld bsid th
dmpst bhind th bilding. Hald aid th animal pstais, did him with an ld twl, and
st t a bwl f wat. In th wks that fllwd, th dg bam m than a mpanin h
bam a asn t is ah mning, t tak walks thgh th nighbhd, and t spak ald
again. Thgh th gif nv disappad, th qit psn f th dg sftnd th shap dgs
f Hald's lnlinss and mindd him that vn a wndd hat still had m t lv.
“Y’ lkin’ ptty gh, p thing, Mas said t him. “W’ll gt y land p
and aft that, smthing f y blly. N lla, s I gss w’ll b mis h n t. tta
giv y a nam, thgh. H lkd at th sad shap th dg was in, lsd his ys bifly, and
said, “Wll, lik I said, y’ lkin’ ptty gh, s I’m gnna all y Rff.
n n f his visits t Hay’s, smn had lft bhind and ntid a listing that wld
hang th s f his lif. A lg abin in th mntain mmnity f ystal Spings,
abandnd f fiftn yas, f half-llapsd, pi s lw it might as wll hav bn a da. H
didn't knw why h t t th pag. H didn’t knw why h alld th nmb. Bt h
mmbd th al stat agnt's vi n th phn—sh sndd spisd anyn had
answd th ad at all. Sh said th pla was at th nd f a ad that stppd bing a ad abt
halfway p. Sh said, "N n's livd th sin th ld fam wh bilt it fz t dath yas
ag." H tld h h’d tak it sight nsn. Sh laghd. H didn't.
H bght th abin f lss than h paid f his fist tk. His finds thght h'd lst
his mind—thy said it in th way finds d, with nnd phn alls and ffs t hlp him
find a nsl instad. Bt h wasn't azy. H was st finishd. Finishd with th ity, finishd
with bing ndd, finishd with th wight f th ppl's xptatins pssing n his hst
lik a snd ibag.3
Th day h lft th apatmnt and dv away, h didn't lk in th aviw mi. H
was afaid if h did, h'd s h standing n th b, and h'd tn bak and spnd th st f his
lif wnding what th mntain might hav mad f him.
Nstld at th dg f a dns pin fst, th ld sti abin std in havy siln,
baing th stak maks f yas f abandnmnt. Th abin’s wathd lgs w vd in dst
and dit, and th paint was pling away fm th windw fams. vgwn blakby bambls
lawd at th tting wap-and ph and sval wdn flbads n th w missing.
Insid, a msty, stal d f damp ath filld th ai whil spks f dst flatd thikly
in th fw bams f snlight piing th glm. Intiat bwbs dapd ass th xpsd
iling bams. Th inti was vid f fnit, bt th fnit fm th apatmnt wld
pvid him th mft h was sd t, spially his favit am hai. Binging th abin bak
t lif wld tak a lt f wk, bt Mas wasn’t dad yt.
H bght th abin nt as an sap bt as a hmming. Th was a diffn, thgh
it tk him yas t ndstand it. Th fist wint naly bk him, as wints n th mntain
always did f ths wh aivd thinking slitd was simply qit. H land thwis. H
land that siln had tth, that tim witht witnss ld wap and bnd, and that a man lft
t lng t his wn hs wld vntally stat answing thm.
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As sn as h mvd int th abin with Rff, h st t wk n th bs that ndd ding.
Wint was lsing in, and th was n tim t wast. Ading t th almana, havy snwfall
was xptd—a pditin that plasd th twnsppl, wh w hping f a sssfl ski
sasn.
That was th wint whn h bgan t ndstand smthing abt lnlinss. nlinss
wasn't th absn f ppl. It was th absn f a witnss. Y an b sndd by a hndd
sls, y an b ttly aln n a mntain and fl hld if smthing—anything—is paying
attntin. Mas didn't knw it thn, bt that wint, h was laying th fndatin f vything
that wld fllw.
H finishd th ma pais t th abin bf th fist snwfall and fnd his nw hm
wam and wlming. Th f n lng lakd, and th walls hld hat. tsid, tw pin stags 4
std lik sntinls, flanking a wdpil lag than any man his ag ght t hav t and stakd
aln. H knw vy ak in th flbads, vy daft fm th windws, vy path f sn
light that mvd ass th kithn wall in its lw wint a.
H knw what th mntain sndd lik at midnight in Janay, whn th ld mad th
ks gan lik ld mn tning in thi slp. And h knw what it sndd lik in Jn, whn
th snwmlt st th stams bhind his hm nning with tt. H land t ad th wath
by th way th wind mvd thgh th pins, and h land t ad his wn mind by th way it
mvd thgh siln.
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Mas, with a fsh p f ff in his hand,stad t his kithn windw at th whit landsap
ving th pin fst that bavd th blizzad, thi banhs bnding nd th wight f th
amlating snw. Th familia smll f bning pin lgs filld th ai, th ama dp and
mfting. Rff was sttld na th hath, tail thmping, ys fixd n th ld man’s vy
mv. H knw th hythm f Mas’s mnings, knw that sn thy’d b walking th sam
wn path dwn th hill, nw hiddn bnath lays f fsh snw.
Rff’s n-vibant gld at had dlld t th spia tns f mmis lng kpt, bt his
aaml-ld ys wathd Mas with th patint dvtin that had aid thm bth thgh
ntlss mntain wints. yal and pttiv, pfing t stay ls t hm ath than
wand, Rff smd t knw what Mas ndd bf Mas himslf did, a sixth sns hnd
thgh yas f mpaninship.
Pin lgs in th fipla akl and glw, asting a wam gldn light nt th inti f
th m. Th mftabl snt f bning wd pmats th ai, blnding with th isp smll
f pin. Th wlming ama f ff bwing adds a th f wamth t th hilly ai. Fm
his windw, Mas an baly mak t th faint lights f Hay’s Pb & b bkning him t
mak th ny dwn th hill.
“I knw that mny-hngy Hay is gnna b pn tday, Rff. H dn’t a what th
wath’s lik. Jst n stm shws p, Hay will pn th d. Nt had t d whn y
liv ight pstais. I think I’ll g dwn th hill t s him. Wanna g alng, Rff Ain’t bn th
sin bf th stm hit. 5
Rff’s tail wags xitdly as h sits lyally at Mas’ sid, ady t ampany him
whv h gs. Th bnd btwn thm is bvis, nv wanting t b spaatd, nv n
witht th th.
“d by, Rff. Hay will b glad t s y. Jst b patint ntil I gt my ld-wath
ga n.
Th pb is a m qat mil dwnhill fm his abin bt nsiding his ld ag and th
intnsity f th blizzad, th tk is ttly dmanding. Th snw is thik, pild p high against th
snding ts. Evy stp h taks is a stggl as th blizzad ntins t ag n, Rff
kping p ls bhind.
Th wind whips th snw int a fnzy, ating a whitt fft, slting in Mas
having t sqint t s th bkn nn sign flashing Ha y’s Pb & b, lik a ban amidst th
blizzad.
Th bitt ld bits int Mas as h blazs a tail thgh kn-dp snw. H plls
dwn th as f his bav-plt tapp’s hat and tks his shpskin-lind mittns int th pkts
f his ld wint at. H’s wn th sam wl saf s many tims that it n lng iths.
vd t th bidg f his ns, th saf’s tassld tails flap wildly in th stinging nslaght f
wind fm th ast. Th ld ai snding him fms a thik, whit fg whn h xhals.
“I knw y’ nt a pp anym, Rff, bt m, by. Y an mak it. W’ almst
th.
At last, Mas ahs th fnt d f Hay’s. Enting th wam ati nty, fg fills
his sptals, tning vything int a bl. H hangs his ld, wn at, saf, and bav-plt
hat n a st f d antls mntd n th wall and nts th pb’s inti. imly lit walls lin
wdn panls adnd with ld hnting tphis. Th ba and bastls a dak mahgany,
plishd t a shin, th stls aftd f pin by a lal atisan. Nn signs abv th ba illminat
th inti with flashing ls, asting flid fltins n th dak wdn walls. Th familia
snt f bning pinwd fills th ai, binging a sns f mft and zinss.
Mas ass nt his sal ph—th last stl na th nty d with Rff at his sid—
and sqints thgh th amb haz, taking invnty f th fw stms psnt. A yng
wman dssd in atti nt sitd t th wath, ams ssd v h hst, taps h ft t th
bat f th msi as sh lans against th kbx slting h tns. Tw lmbjak mn,
dssd in flannl shits and thik wk ans, a playing pl na th iv-k fipla in th
fa n. Th fi akls and dans, ating a wam and inviting ambian in th pb.
Th bastls a npid, thi shins nthd. Bhind th ba, Hay diligntly
sbs glasss in th sink, his slvs lld p, valing his msla fams. In his mid-fiftis,
h ais xta wight and his middl fm sampling t many f his bs n tap. ff and
impatint with sm f th nly ski wd, h habs a dp sns f spnsibility f his
gla patns.
“Bn a pl f days sin I saw y tw last, Mas.
“nly bn tw days, Hay.
“h, that’s ight, Hay says with a knwing gin. “Hi th, Rff Thn his ys tn
t Mas’s wathd fa. “Hw a y hlding p in this blizzad, Mas
“Wll, I’m h, ain’t I
“T. And w’ glad t hav y. Bt hw a y fling
“ld.
“ld ld ain’t s bad. Btt than bin’ dad.
“Hw wld y knw Mas spndd. “Y nv bn dad.
Th antanks ld man’s wathd fa inkls at th ns f his ys whn h
dlivs his tts, a bif flash f mishif ssing his fats bf sttling bak int th stn
lins f a man wh has wathd many mntain wints.
“Wll, y’ ight abt that, Mas. What’ll it b
“Th sal.
“I knw y sal is pilsn, bt d y want a shll a shn
“ I lk lik I daggd myslf all th way dwn h in this gdfsakn wath f a
shll Mak it a bmba.
“A shn it is, says Hay.7
Exptly handling th fishbwl-sizd glass, h psitins it nd th tap, his ams tnd
fm yas f plling pints and lifting kgs. Amb liqid tmbld fm th tap, bilding a thik
ivy had that s t th im bf sttling with a gntl hiss.
Mas’s fa is thd with th lins f had wk and xps t th lmnts, his skin
tgh and wn lik a wll-tavld lath saddl. Th dp w’s ft bnath his ys spak f
ndlss days spnt sqinting against th hash sn and bitt winds. It is th fa f a man wh has
livd a liftim in th nfgiving wild, and it bas th wight f ths yas. His gay hai stands
p in wild tfts, and his fadd flannl shit has sn btt days, th fabi thin and wn fm
yas f s. His ld, allsd hands shw th yas f ads wk thy had ndd wking
in th lgging amps.
H tns t lk at th yng wman, his ys svying h lightwight lthing nt
sitabl f th wath. Sh taps h fings n th kbx t th bat f th msi, h bightly
paintd nails standing t against th mtd tns f th pb. H glans at th lmbjak mn,
wh fs n thi pl gam, thi flannl shits and ans fitting in with th sti inti.
Hay plas th shn n th ba and waths Mas sta at th gldn liqid, as
bads f ndnsatin dip dwn th sids f th fishbwl f b. H lans in ls, his ys
lking nt Mas’s wathd fa, and asks, “What’s th matt, Mas Wath gt y
dwn
“Wath dn’t gt m dwn. It’s ld ag and this stm gts t m. Wasn’t xptin’ t
gt dmpd n s had. That snw t th is p t my dan kns. This ld bak f min dn’t
hlp ith. nna b vn had gin’ bak hadin’ int th wath.
“Why’d y m dwn thn in ths nditins
“’as I an.
“Thé, Mas, spnds Hay“Thé. Anyway, th twnsflk will b happy
whn th blizzad’s v, h stats, latdly. “All that snw will mak f gd skiing. Y
dn’t ski, d y, Mas
“Hw many tims y gnna ask m that f gdsaks t bad ankls. Y knw that.
“Wll, bsinss will ally pik p whn this stm’s v.
“Yah, wll, that might b gd f y, bt I pf th lw sasn whn it’s pa ‘n’
qit and h. As lng as I hav my ff in th mnin’ and ht ta f bdtim, a pin lg 8
bnin’ in th wdstv, and l’ Rff f mpany, I’m a happy amp. Maks lks at Rff
sitting at his sid. “Ain’t that ight, by
“Hw is Rff ths days" Hay asks, alady knwing th answ. “H lks gd.
“Yah, h’s gd. h, h dn’t wanna g tds lik h sd t. Taks aft m, I
gss. an’t say I blam him. I dn’t fl lik din’ mh ls myslf ths days. Bin’ as I’m
insid a lt, l’ Rff is gd mpany.
“Y’ lky t hav him, Hay tlls Mas. “Evybdy shld hav a mpanin
lik ld Rff, th. “Yssi, y’ a lky man.
“ I s th stm gt t y sign t th, Mas hims in as h aiss his fishbwl f
pilsn f a halthy swallw, wiping th sds fm his Sam Ellitt-styld mstah with his shit
slv.
“Bk a windw, t, Hay says. “Nt bad, nsiding. I vd th windw f
nw, bt th’s n hy t gt th sign fixd. Evybdy knws wh Hay’s Pb & b is.
ld Mas glans n again at th wman at th kbx as sh slts a sng that
h’s had a hndd tims at Hay’s bt an’t nam th tn th atist. Th tw mn playing
pl pay n attntin t th wman th msi. Thy lagh btwn thmslvs and ak th
balls f anth nd f ight-ball. Th wman abandns th kbx and mvs with flid
ga, h bdy swaying t th hythm f th msi playing. H lng hai bns and swils as
sh dans h way past th fipla and th mn playing pl, stpping mmntaily t
pfm a pitt, bf ntining t th fa nd f th ba ppsit Mas, waving t him,
wh thn ipats with a wav f his wn.
“Hay, st m p, plas, sh alls t.
“ming ight p, Mna, Hay hlls v his shld. “tta tak a f Mna,
Mas. B ight bak.
Aft sving Mna and ngaging in sm findly small talk, Hay tns t fa
Maks.
“Anth shn, Maks Blizzad might lt p a bit if y wait.
“Nah! It’s dinn tim f Rff. W bst b halin’ btts phill. Bt fist, p m a
stiff sht f vdka f th ad. Hlp kp m wam f th hik bak p. And p n f
yslf.
Hay sts tw shts dwn and tasts, “H’s t lif, Mas.9
“Amn, Mas plis.
“Thanks f th sht. t hm saf.
Mas dns his havy at and f hat, waps his saf snggly and his fa, and slips
n his mittns. tsid, th blizzad has nly intnsifid ding his stay, th wind nw hling
snw sidways past Hay's fstd windws whil Mas had lingd v his pilsn,
saving bth th wamth and th nvsatin.
“It’s all phill fm h, Rff. ad th way, l’ by. I’ll fllw y taks.
Th blizzad ags n, its whit tndils f snw swiling in th wind, ving thi
pvis ftpints fm thi tk dwn t Hay’s with a thik whit blankt, and vything
ls in sight as wll. Mas fights t mak t th shaps f th n-familia ts, thi
banhs wighd dwn by th snw. Rff knws his way hm, and as ld as h is, h is still
fast than Mas n th phill limb. Th stinging hill gnaws at Mas’s fa as h sqints t
s th lights f his abin fliking dimly in th distan. H tdgs n, battling his way phill
had-n int th wath t gt hm and sap th bitt ld. With ah tdis stp, th
smll f bning wd and th faint snt f pin manat fm his abin.
At last, thy ah thi abin, th xti vd in a thik lay f snw and th
windws fstd v. Th insid is wam and inviting with th last f th bning mbs still
akling in th wdstv whil a sft glw fm th antiq fl lamp fliks thght th
m. Mas kiks ff his Ndi bts and daps his snw-vd at and tapp’s hat n
th d-antl at ak st insid th fnt d. H plas his saf and mittns n th hath
t dy and twls ff th snwmlt fm his bad and mstah. Thy a hm and
mftabl at last.
“d by, Rff. I knw y ld gt s hm. Y did gd, l’ by. Bt it dsn’t
lk lik th stm is gnna lt p any tim sn. W’ll b staying in tmw."
Mas fds th stv anth pin lg, wathing as th distbd mbs glw
bight, snding spaks as h nstls th wd n th andins. H dns his nly pai f slipps,
th fabi fayd and wn and plas a tapt n th stvtp t hat wat. Whil h gazs t
th windw at th psistnt stm, th tapt whistls. H ps ht wat v th ta bag in his
ft-paid favit mg, thn shffls v t his amhai, sffd bt mftabl, its lth
wn fm yas f s, pasing t ath his bath. Th blak ta in his p stams and swils,
th dak liqid inviting and mfting.
“m h, Rff. Sit by m. I dn’t knw what I wld d f mpany if y wn’t
and. ttin’ had and had hikin’ dwn t Hay’s and bak. Hp w dn’t gt anth
wint lik this n.
Bf his ta is finishd, h falls aslp in his amhai, Rff at his sid.
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Spring
Th snwpak vs th landsap in ystal Spings, and th aly signs f sping
val yng bds spting fm th qaking aspns, th mapls, and th iv bihs.
SummerTh bight, gldn lavs f th aspns shimm in th snlight, whil th vibant, snyllw lavs f th iv bihs dan in th bz.
Autumn –
Th mapls' ih imsn fliag stand t against th dak gn f th ldgpl pins
ntil atmn snds its vibant fall ls
Winter –
ystal Spings is n again aliv, th dak gn pins ntasting against th fsh
snwblanktd gnd, inviting skis t hit th slps.
As Mna aivs f h annal visit t ystal Spings, h ys fill with th stnning
sny f th familia snw-appd ski mntain and th ldgpl pins standing tall against
th whit bakgnd, a vast diffn fm th flat, gn sny f h hmtwn in
Kntky. Hay's Pb & b tms with th aps ski wd, thi nn pakas tning th ba
int a kalidsp f l whil tals f vity ns and nthd pwd fly amng thm as
fly as th amb b in thi glasss.
Mna stands at th kbx n again slting h favit tns. As sh bns past
th fipla n h tn t h stl at th ba, h ys dat and th wdd pb sahing
th sa f lfl pakas f th familia sight f th ld man. Whn h is nwh t b sn,
sh asks Hay abt his whabts.
“Why, l’ Mas passd away v th smm whil hpping dwd. Fnd him
n day whn pl f s wnt lkin’ f him. W fnd him st laying’ th still hlding
th mal Bt h was gn. It was a hat attak that did him in.