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(2022•全国甲卷) 你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括： 1. 海洋的重要性；2. 保护海洋的倡议。 注意：1. 词数 100 左右；2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。 Our Oceans, Our Responsibility World Oceans Day falls on June 8. It aims to raise awareness of protecting the oceans, which play a crucial part in global ecosystem. Without the oceans, no living things would survive, humans included. As senior students, we can protect oceans in our own way. It pays to live a low-carbon life due to the fact that global warming has become a great threat to sea creatures. It is quite necessary to reduce plastic consumption and properly dispose of waste. Plus, we may as well support sustainable seafood choices and advocate for responsible fishing practices. When surfing or boating, never drop litter into the sea. What counts most is that participating in the voluntary activities launched by the ocean organization can be of great significance. Actions speak louder than words. Every little effort counts. As long as we try our best, we will make a big difference to the marine environment. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------假定你是李华，请为学校英文报“我与科技”栏目投稿，结合本次科技馆研学活动，谈谈你的收获与思 考，内容包括：1. 活动经历；2. 所思所感；3. 对科技学习的认识。 My Bond with Science and Technology Last weekend, I embarked on a tech exploration tour at the City Science Museum, organized by our school. It kicked off with an exhibition on the history of Chinese science, unfolding the brilliance of ancient inventions. What followed was a series of interactive experiments, which uncovered the fascinating logic behind modern technologies. With a lecture on future scientific frontiers, the tour was brought to an end. Not only did it ignite my curiosity, but it also deepened my appreciation for the dynamic nature of science. This journey made me realize that behind every great breakthrough lies years of dedication and inquiry. The experience was a true eye-opener, encouraging me to engage with science not just as knowledge, but as a way of thinking. It has inspired me to approach technology with both wonder and responsibility. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------你校将举办以心理健康为主题的英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括： 1. 说明心理健康的重要性；2. 谈谈如何保持心理健康。 注意：1. 写作词数应为 80 个左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 In our busy study lives, it's easy to overlook the importance of mental health. Yet, just like physical health, it plays a key role in our overall well-being and deserves our care. Without a healthy mind, it’s challenging to cope with/navigate stress and reach our full potential. As students facing academic and social pressures, we can prioritize/protect our mental well-being in our own way. When feeling overwhelmed, never hesitate to seek help from trusted people, who can offer valuable support and comfort in tough times. Plus, it pays to engage in enjoyable and relaxing activities as it helps us return to study life refreshed and recharged. Getting sufficient sleep and eating well contribute to emotional balance, which in turn improves our concentration and learning efficiency. What counts most is that making self-care a habit allows us to boost self-awareness and stay emotionally stable even in challenging times. Ready to level up your life? Small efforts, big impact! Taking care of our minds unlocks our potential and inspires everyone around us. Let’s light up our school days with the gentle glow of mental well-being—and shine from the inside out, together!In our busy study lives, it's easy to overlook the importance of mental health.在我们忙碌的学习生活中，我们很容易忽视心理健康的重要性。 Yet, just like physical health, it plays a key role in our overall well-being and deserves our care.然而，就像身体健康一样，它在我们整体健康中起着关键作用，值得我们关爱。 Without a healthy mind, it’s challenging to cope with/navigate stress and reach our full potential.没有健康的心理，应对/驾驭压力和充分发挥我们的潜力就会变得困难。 As students facing academic and social pressures, we can prioritize/protect our mental well-being in our own way.作为面临学业和社交压力的学生，我们可以用自己的方式优先考虑/保护我们的心理健康。 When feeling overwhelmed, never hesitate to seek help from trusted people, who can offer valuable support and comfort in tough times.当感到不知所措时，不要犹豫向信任的人寻求帮助，他们可以在困难时期提供宝贵的支持和慰藉。 Plus, it pays to engage in enjoyable and relaxing activities as it helps us return to study life refreshed and recharged.此外，参与令人愉快和放松的活动是值得的，因为它能帮助我们精神焕发、精力充沛地回到学习 生活中。 Getting sufficient sleep and eating well contribute to emotional balance, which in turn improves our concentration and learning efficiency.充足的睡眠和健康的饮食有助于情绪平衡，而情绪平衡反过来又能提高我们的注意力和学习效率。 What counts most is that making self-care a habit allows us to boost self-awareness and stay emotionally stable even in challenging times.最重要的是，将自我关怀变成一种习惯能帮助我们提高自我意识，即使在充满挑战的时期也能保 持情绪稳定。 Ready to level up your life? Small efforts, big impact! 准备好提升你的生活了吗？小小的努力，巨大的影响！ Taking care of our minds unlocks our potential and inspires everyone around us.照顾好我们的心灵能释放我们的潜力，并激励我们周围的每一个人。 Let’s light up our school days with the gentle glow of mental well-being—and shine from the inside out, together! 让我们用心理健康的温柔光芒照亮我们的校园生活——并从内心深处一起闪耀！ -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------结构分析： 一、三段式结构图解 段落 功能说明 内容要点 常用句型框架 引言 段 引出主题 + 强调 重要性 心理健康容易被忽视，但至关重要 It’s easy to..., Yet..., Just like..., It plays a key role in...正文 段 提出建议 + 解释 好处 求助、休闲活动、睡眠饮食、自我 照顾等 When..., Plus, It pays to..., What counts most is that...结尾 段 鼓舞人心 + 总结 升华 小努力成就大改变，用心理健康点 亮校园生活 Ready to...? Small efforts, big impact! Let’s..., and...二、每段功能详细分析与句型提炼 第一段（引出主题） 目的：引起共鸣，引出心理健康的重要性 原句亮点： It’s easy to overlook the importance of mental health. Yet, just like physical health, it plays a key role in our overall well-being.可迁移模仿句式：三个句式非常适合作为应用文写作中的“开头段话题引入句”模板，具有结构清晰、 语气正式、逻辑严密 It's easy to overlook the importance of... Just like..., ... plays a key role in... ... deserves our attention and care.具体示例： ✅ 句式一：It's easy to overlook the importance of... （我们很容易忽视……的重要性） 应用文主题 迁移句式示例 校园锻炼倡议 书 It’s easy to overlook the importance of daily physical exercise in our tight school schedule.网络使用建议 信 It’s easy to overlook the importance of setting boundaries while using smartphones.阅读推广演讲 稿 It’s easy to overlook the importance of reading when we’re surrounded by short videos and games. ✅ 句式二：Just like..., ... plays a key role in... （正如……，……在……中也起着关键作用） 应用文主题 迁移句式示例 环保主题投稿 文 Just like water and food, a clean environment plays a key role in our survival and development.心理健康倡议 书 Just like physical health, mental wellness plays a key role in our school life.学习习惯建议 信 Just like natural talent, good study habits play a key role in academic success. ✅ 句式三：... deserves our attention and care. （……值得我们的关注与呵护） 应用文主题 迁移句式示例 友谊主题演讲稿 True friendship deserves our attention and care, especially in a fast-paced digital world.时间管理投稿文 Time, once gone, never returns—it truly deserves our attention and care.传统文化介绍信 Chinese calligraphy, a symbol of our culture, deserves our attention and care. ✅ 小结： 句式功能 教学引导语 It's easy to... 用于引起读者关注，常用于问题引出或现象描述 Just like... 常用于类比比较，引导读者建立认知联系 ...deserves... 用于加强观点、表达价值感和责任感第二段（提出建议 + 好处解释） 目的：提供具体可行的做法，并辅以逻辑解释与情感共鸣 建议行为 后接解释结构 seek help from trusted people who can offer valuable support and comfort... engage in enjoyable activities as it helps us return... refreshed and recharged get enough sleep and eat well which in turn improves our concentration... make self-care a habit allows us to boost self-awareness and stay stable...常用句型框架总结：正文建议段落中的黄金表达结构，特别适用于应用文写作（如建议信、演讲稿、 倡议信、短文投稿等）中“建议+原因”部分的表达。下面将这 4 个句式迁移到不同主题应用文中进行 示例仿写，并配上中文释义与写作提示，帮助举一反三、灵活运用。 When feeling..., never hesitate to... It pays to do sth, as it... Doing sth contributes to..., which in turn... What counts most is that... ✅ 一、句式迁移与应用（含中文释义） 1. When feeling..., never hesitate to... （当你感到……时，别犹豫去……） 主题 应用文类型 仿写示例 心理健康 投稿文 When feeling overwhelmed, never hesitate to talk to someone you trust.校园交友 建议信 When feeling left out, never hesitate to join a club or say hello first.学业压力 倡议信 When feeling lost in study, never hesitate to ask your teachers for help. 2. It pays to do sth, as it... （……是值得的，因为它……） 主题 应用文类 型 仿写示例 阅读习 惯 演讲稿 It pays to read regularly, as it expands your thinking and sharpens your mind.节约用 水 倡议信 It pays to turn of the tap, as it saves valuable water resources.锻炼身 体 建议信 It pays to walk or cycle to school, as it benefits both your health and the environment. 3. Doing sth contributes to..., which in turn... （做某事有助于……，进而……） 主题 应用文类 型 仿写示例 时间管 理 投稿文 Keeping a daily schedule contributes to better time use, which in turn improves study ef iciency.垃圾分 类 倡议信 Sorting waste contributes to a cleaner environment, which in turn benefits public health.自我管 理 建议信 Limiting phone use contributes to better focus, which in turn boosts learning outcomes.4. What counts most is that... （最重要的是……） 主题 应用文类 型 仿写示例 心理建 设 投稿文 What counts most is that we learn to care for our mental well-being every day.绿色出 行 倡议信 What counts most is that each of us takes responsibility for our own carbon footprint.目标设 定 建议信 What counts most is that we stay consistent, even when motivation fades. ✅ 二、写作指导提示 句式 功能定位 建议语 When feeling..., never hesitate 情境引导 + 行动鼓励 学会勇于表达/主动应对问题 It pays to..., as it... 建议 + 正面结果 强调行为的正面收益，引导正向思维 Doing..., which in turn... 结果递进 + 逻辑衔接 用于强化“行动—影响—进一步结果”的逻辑链 What counts most is that... 总结升华 + 强调重点 常用于段落结尾句，提升思想深度 第三段（结尾升华） 目的：呼应开头，鼓舞行动，情感升温，语言感染力强 原句亮点： Ready to level up your life? Small ef orts, big impact! Let’s light up our school days with the gentle glow of mental well-being—and shine from the inside out, together! 可迁移句式模板： Ready to + 动词原形? Small ___, big ___! Let’s + 动词 + 比喻/意象表达（e.g. light up / grow / spread） ...together / as one / with pride / with open hearts 这 4 组句式非常适合用于应用文写作中的“结尾升华段”，尤其适用于演讲稿、倡议信、短文投稿等 文体，既青春有力，又具有鼓舞作用。句式迁移+多主题仿写 ✅ 一、句式结构迁移 + 多主题仿写 1. Ready to + 动词原形? （你准备好……了吗？） 应用主题 应用文类型 句式仿写示例 心理健康 投稿文 Ready to care for your mind and unlock your strength? 绿色校园 倡议信 Ready to go green and change the way we live on campus? 时间管理 演讲稿 Ready to take control of your time and own your future? 阅读推广 宣传稿 Ready to turn the page and dive into the world of books?2. Small ___, big ___! （微小的……，巨大的……！） 应用主题 应用文类型 句式仿写示例 友善校园 倡议信 Small acts, big warmth! 心理健康 投稿文 Small changes, big impact! 节能减排 倡议信 Small switches, big savings! 行为习惯 建议信 Small steps, big progress! 3. Let’s + 动词 + 比喻/意象表达 （让我们……，用富有画面感或象征意义的动词） 应用主题 应用文类型 仿写表达 校园精神 演讲稿 Let’s light up our school life with kindness and courage.心理健康 投稿文 Let’s plant the seeds of self-care and let them blossom within.节约资源 倡议信 Let’s turn of the waste and turn on the future.志愿服务 演讲稿 Let’s spread love and warmth across every corner of our campus. 4. ...together / as one / with pride / with open hearts （句尾修饰，提升情感表达层次） 应用主题 应用文类型 仿写表达 团队合作 建议信 Let’s grow stronger and overcome every challenge—together.校园环保 倡议信 Let’s protect our environment—as one.自我成长 演讲稿 Let’s face every new day with pride and determination.文化交流 活动通知 Let’s welcome new cultures with open hearts and curious minds. ✅ 二、教学功能定位 + 板书建议 句式结构 功能定位 教学提示语 Ready to... ? 情感激励+任务引导 用于段尾提问激发读者参与感，适合写作结尾起句 Small ___, big ___! 对比修辞+情感鼓舞 对比句式，简短有力，适合作为收尾标语 Let’s + 动词 + 意象表 达 呼吁行动+画面感增 强 使用动词比喻表达愿景和号召，增强语言感染力 ...together / with pride 情绪升华+集体感增 强 适合结尾句修饰，营造团队感、共鸣感、使命感等氛 围 三、可模仿写作表达群模板（句群结构） 模板框架：建议 + 原因结构（可广泛迁移到任何议论文/投稿/演讲稿） When facing..., never hesitate to... Plus, it pays to..., as it helps... Doing..., which in turn... What counts most is that...示例迁移（写作话题：学习方法） When falling behind in a subject, never hesitate to ask teachers for guidance. Plus, it pays to review regularly, as it helps reinforce what we’ve learned. Forming a habit of previewing lessons contributes to better understanding, which in turn boosts our confidence. What counts most is that developing good habits lays the foundation for academic success.四、结构识别训练题（掌握写作逻辑） 任务：将下列句子归入结构图中 句子 所属段落 It’s easy to overlook the importance of mental health. 引言段 Getting sufficient sleep and eating well contribute to... 正文段 Ready to level up your life? 结尾段 When feeling overwhelmed, never hesitate to seek help... 正文段 Let’s light up our school days with the gentle glow... 结尾段 What counts most is that making self-care a habit... 正文段 五、写作迁移 任务 1：话题仿写 请模仿这篇文章的结构，以“如何建立良好的时间管理习惯”为主题，完成三段式投稿文一篇。 任务 2：句式仿写练习 It pays to do sth, as it...仿写：It pays to read regularly, as it... What counts most is that...仿写：What counts most is that we...写作迁移答案：实现从“心理健康”话题到“时间管理”话题的结构模仿与语言迁移。 任务 1：话题仿写（三段式投稿文） 主题：如何建立良好的时间管理习惯 文体：短文投稿 标题：Time Well Spent, Life Well Lived Time Well Spent, Life Well Lived In our hectic school life, many students struggle with poor time management. As homework piles up and deadlines approach, it becomes clear that learning to manage time wisely is not just helpful—it’s essential for success and well-being. To build better habits, we can start by making a daily schedule and sticking to it. It pays to plan ahead, as it helps us avoid last-minute stress and stay on top of our tasks. When we divide big assignments into smaller, manageable steps, we’re less likely to feel overwhelmed. Getting rid of distractions, such as excessive phone use, contributes to better focus, which in turn boosts our study efficiency. What counts most is that developing a consistent routine allows us to balance study and rest, giving our days structure and purpose. Small habits shape great results. Let’s take control of our time, stay organized, and make every minute count. Better time management means less stress, more confidence, and a brighter path ahead! ✅ 模仿说明（结构对应） 段落 功能 心理健康原文 时间管理仿写 1 引出话题 It’s easy to overlook... many students struggle with... 2 提建议+益处 It pays to..., What counts most It pays to..., What counts most 3 升华总结 Small efforts, big impact! Small habits shape great results.任务 2：句式仿写练习答案 It pays to read regularly, as it helps build your vocabulary and deepen your understanding of various topics. （坚持阅读有益于积累词汇、拓宽知识） What counts most is that we use our time wisely and stick to a schedule that works for us. （最重要的是我们要明智地利用时间，并坚持适合自己的计划）✅ 优化亮点： 每条建议后都紧跟益处解释；使用了多种高级连接结构： 定语从句：who can offer valuable support...原因状语从句：since feeling supported helps...非谓语结构：engaging in activities, getting enough sleep； 结尾更具语言张力和感染力，富有号召性。 仿写训练任务（一） 任务名称：用“心理健康”句式仿写“运动健康”主题段落 请模仿以下句式，仿写一段关于运动对健康帮助的英文段落： Getting sufficient sleep and eating well contribute to emotional balance, which in turn improves our concentration and learning efficiency.仿写示例（供参考）： Doing regular physical exercise helps boost physical strength, which in turn improves our focus and keeps our minds active in class.仿写训练任务（二） 任务名称：模仿句群生成段落 请模仿下列结构，自主更换话题（如学习效率 / 人际关系），写出一个建议 + 益处段落： 原文结构： When feeling overwhelmed, never hesitate to seek help from... Plus, it pays to engage in... Getting sufficient..., which in turn improves... What counts most is that...学生仿写示例（主题：学习习惯）： When struggling with difficult subjects, never hesitate to ask teachers for help, who can offer useful guidance. Plus, it pays to review lessons regularly as it helps reinforce what we’ve learned. Getting enough rest before exams, which in turn improves memory and performance, is also vital. What counts most is that forming good habits allows us to stay consistent and confident.结构识别题 请将下列句子分类写入三段式结构中： 1. Ready to level up your life? 2. When feeling overwhelmed, never hesitate to seek help... 3. Getting sufficient sleep and eating well contribute to... 4. It’s easy to overlook the importance of mental health... 5. What counts most is that making self-care a habit... 6. Taking care of our minds unlocks our potential...段落 内容 开头 4 正文 2, 3, 5 结尾 1, 6 句型替换练习 将下列句子用不同结构表达，但保留原意： It pays to engage in enjoyable and relaxing activities. → Engaging in enjoyable and relaxing activities is an effective way to recharge. Getting sufficient sleep and eating well contribute to emotional balance. → Emotional balance can be improved by sleeping enough and eating healthily. What counts most is that making self-care a habit allows us to stay stable. → The key to stability is forming the habit of self-care.这两篇短文投稿分别属于活动安排类和观点表达类应用文，在题目特点和审题要点上有明显差异。活动安排类（如科技馆研学）侧重 叙事性，要求描述活动经历、细节场景和个人感悟，需注意避免流水账，通过生动描写和思考升华来体现收获；观点表达类（如心理 健康）则强调逻辑性，需分点论述主题重要性及可行性建议，要求结合具体群体（如学生）提出针对性方法，避免空泛议论。审题时， 两类题目都需紧扣关键词、明确人称时态，但活动类应突出"细节+金句"的情感共鸣，观点类则采用"问题-解决"模式增强说服力，通 过差异化策略满足各自的写作要求。 两篇短文投稿分别属于活动安排类与观点表达类应用文，前者以科技馆研学活动为载体，通过描述校外活动过程、分享体验并反思价 值；后者聚焦心理健康议题，阐明看法、提出建议并引发共鸣。两类短文投稿在出题特点上，活动安排类题材源于学校组织的各类实 践活动，写作目的是复述活动、侧重过程与感悟，语言风格叙议结合，结尾多为情感升华；观点表达类则围绕热门公共议题，旨在表 达态度、提出建议，强调逻辑与议论性，结尾常用号召加愿景结构。审题与写作时，活动安排类需定位活动背景、过程及感悟，围绕 “看 到什么、印象最深的事、心理转变及未来行动” 展开；观点表达类需明确关注焦点与任务要求，从 “主题关联、问题分析、建议做法 及鼓励他人” 着手。二者虽均采用三段式结构，但侧重点不同，开头段分别强调亲身参与和社会现象，正文段分别侧重叙述感悟与分 析对策，结尾段分别突出成长感悟与价值重申。写作中，需避免流水账、无逻辑建议、空泛结尾及口语化表达等误区，前者应注重活 动细节与成长升华，后者需突出现象分析、对策建议与感染力，以此提升写作质量 。